Vasopressin
Pee.. Pee.. Pee..
How often do you pee?
How did you feel?
Can you feel the ill?
Are you aware
of the hormone that is spared?
It is known as Vasopressin,
And it suppresses the urine.
Controlled by the hypothalamus,
A part of man that is not anonymous.
And secreted by the posterior gland,
the gland that is in command.
And now you know,
That it will show,
If there is an absence of vasopressin,
There is increase in urination.
*bow*
Photo by nickjohnson
How often do you pee?
How did you feel?
Can you feel the ill?
Are you aware
of the hormone that is spared?
It is known as Vasopressin,
And it suppresses the urine.
Controlled by the hypothalamus,
A part of man that is not anonymous.
And secreted by the posterior gland,
the gland that is in command.
And now you know,
That it will show,
If there is an absence of vasopressin,
There is increase in urination.
*bow*
Photo by nickjohnson
when reading this i want to pee,
ReplyDeletehaha. very nice work
joy nice poem!! you did well in rhyming the words. a plus factor! good job.
ReplyDeletep.s. ginaya mo ung bow ko!!! grr.
haha.. very short poem..but i enjoyed reading it.i love the 1st part "Pee..pee..pee".haha uhm,,but im still looking for more details to add on..but still,u got me at Pee..Pee..Pee.hahahah
ReplyDeleteNice try, include more information about your topic.
ReplyDeletehuh,,pee,pee,pee,
ReplyDeleteok im about to pee now,,eheh
nice post, but try to include some more information about your topic..
I think this is pretty good! You have a creative style on your own. Using the words pee several times showed you really want to emphasize in urination. Maybe that's why some of the comments, rather, commentators feel like peeing. he he he.
ReplyDeleteGood job!
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